Something that i struggle with would have to be sentence clarity. It is hard when it sounds fine to me just going through a sentence then someonelse will read it or i will out loud and realize that it makes no sense.This website really had some good information for help with this.
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Be careful about placement of subordinate clauses
Use active voice
Use parallel constructions
Avoid noun strings
Avoid overusing noun forms of verbs
Avoid multiple negatives
Choose action verbs over forms of be
Avoid unclear pronoun references
The site was http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/general/gl_sentclar.html
Wednesday, February 4, 2009
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